Hey @DRastaNi9e,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Lonely Heart'! 💥
Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏
It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen!
This track makes the listener tap into their emotions, well done. 💜
Absolutely loved how you switched up the flows on this, the transition between the hook and verses are super smooth and the lyricism and storytelling here are really a highlight. You know how to paint a vivid picture, super impressive. The effects are just a little overdone on the hook, we'd love a more natural sound for a more raw feel but the track is super dope even if the mix could be cleaned up a little.
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @DRastaNi9e, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Lonely Heart'! 💥 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! This track makes the listener tap into their emotions, well done. 💜 Absolutely loved how you switched up the flows on this, the transition between the hook and verses are super smooth and the lyricism and storytelling here are really a highlight. You know how to paint a vivid picture, super impressive. The effects are just a little overdone on the hook, we'd love a more natural sound for a more raw feel but the track is super dope even if the mix could be cleaned up a little. Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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