freestyle ruff draft
life takes a turn an time still tikking so i ask myself if anyone listening so pay attention that life is a mission u got to keep on livein to see what comes with it your life can make a turn a different direction so i ask god to be my winness
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Wassup @tarusneal.6913753, Thank you for sharing 'freestyle ruff draft ' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! ✨ Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. 🌠 Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
life takes a turn an time still tikking so i ask myself if anyone listening so pay attention that life is a mission u got to keep on livein to see what comes with it your life can make a turn a different direction so i ask god to be my winness
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