Hi @jaydukes!
Welcome to our feedback of 'BACK 2 THE ROOTS'! π₯
The vocals are a lil' loud. That's OK, just slide the volume down a bit and you've got yourself a perfect mix.
Your bars need work, try write lyrics that are meaningful to you. The rhyming is well put together. β¨
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Awesome beat, it really makes your track stand out! π§¨
The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it?
There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi @jaydukes! Welcome to our feedback of 'BACK 2 THE ROOTS'! π₯ The vocals are a lil' loud. That's OK, just slide the volume down a bit and you've got yourself a perfect mix. Your bars need work, try write lyrics that are meaningful to you. The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Awesome beat, it really makes your track stand out! 𧨠The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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