ROOKIE

DMY16

Author

4 years ago

Hi G YOU MAY KNOW ME FROM MOTIVATION I. KNOW I HAVE IMPROVED NOW NO MORE ROOKIE SONGS I MAY NOT BE THE BEST AT MUSIC YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS I KNOW YOU WILL DISSAGREE WHITH ME BUT THERE'S ONE THING I HAVE TO SAY ABOUT MYSELF AND THAT IS I AM ROOKIE ROOKIE ROOKIE ROOKIE I AM A ROOKIE ROOKIE AND I LIKE COOKIES. THIS WILL MAKE YOU LAUGH SO EAT YOUR COKIES NO MILK JUST COOKIES I MAY BE A ROOKIE BUT I AM STRONG I AM NOT WEAK I AM VERY STRONG I HAVE POWER I AM ROOKIE ROOKIE ROOKIE ROOKIE I AM A ROOKIE ROOKIE AND I LIKE THE POWER I HAVE I DON'T CARE IF I AM A ROOKIE ROOKIE ROOKIE ROOKIE I AM STRONG YA

Damien Feltus

4 years ago

Like this rap, It is very good. But I’m seeing good I want to see great, and when I start seeing great I want to see excellent. When I see excellent I want to see legendary. Remember I will be watching.

DripGawd Zoo🐐

4 years ago

Keep working you have some time to work 💯

Cyrus Eliakim Yeshurun

4 years ago

U caught da beat pretty gud, maybe speak a lil moe clear an ah lil moe louda an u on yo way brutha

𝔎𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔖𝔴𝔲𝔫𝔤

4 years ago

🔥 💯

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @tigergreen! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'DEMPSEY ROOKIE '! 💥 We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. 👍 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

DMY16

Author

4 years ago

Thanks man