What's up @shawnsorrells,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'trick or treat'! π₯
There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear.
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track.
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @shawnsorrells, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'trick or treat'! π₯ There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. π€ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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