Lucky ones (11:21)

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miss one of those days with my boy kily we miss boy it reminds those day when we used to roll with toys know I'm rolling with troy rip you know to young boy kily we will protect fily and Billy anyway I'm collecting glocks every month goons try to snatch my ice like berry dont fuck up the vibe like mac flurry big bro balling like steph curry shanked him at eye know the is blurry but finna drop a tape soon yrn living any being like yrn living but you flipping rip to my boy nah because you tripping shanked him at the eye dripping blood screams mommy kicking on some people yrn living always at the block doing crazy things miss my boys but they twins , my mom yeah any got kings think about taking over the block finna take his life with glock they thinking they smart but they don't have a part nah because they fart most ley they dont have a cart this is the damn intro rip to my boy nino thinking he's Nemo missing my boy Creso sometimes think about bitches switch it up with some glitches thinking he got some stitches nah because you snitches big bro s thinking they glitches flipp it up with some switches nigga show us luv for the money thinking they fucking running now they almost trying niggas thinking they stunning look at them they fucking struggling like danm hobo first gig for the promo shout out to solo playing this dolo made mistakes I'll do what it takes to the danm top promise I'll never flop and never drop I ain't never gonna stop

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YRN Hutes

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4 years ago

Mario McClinton

4 years ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

Denver Fuller

4 years ago

Dope Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏

Dionne

4 years ago

I'm lowkey vibin' wid it💥👌 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @yrnhutes.6723393, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Lucky ones (11:21)'! 💥 The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Good choice of beat! 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Bishop

4 years ago

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SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

6 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

AngelSgp

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Limitless Smoke

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯