Yo @jayjaylive,
It's time for us to take a look at 'OMK'! ๐ฅ
Your vocals are just a bit higher in volume than the beat, try turn them down a bit!
Good bars here, defo works here! ๐
You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
You got such a lit track here, the beat goes off! Your bars are dope and you really know how to flow well on the beat. You just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. You're nearly there just keep on practising on your sound and we know you can make it!
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! ๐ค
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Yo @jayjaylive, It's time for us to take a look at 'OMK'! ๐ฅ Your vocals are just a bit higher in volume than the beat, try turn them down a bit! Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Great beat choice, really works with the track! You got such a lit track here, the beat goes off! Your bars are dope and you really know how to flow well on the beat. You just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. You're nearly there just keep on practising on your sound and we know you can make it! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! ๐ค We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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