Mental Health
yeah yeah yeah long time ago here I go well when I was just 19 had my heart broken in two but nobody knows how it tore me apart felt more useless than a fart. nobody cared nobody was there for me because I just felt like I had to just be perfect still. still the number 1 brother still the 1 friend but inside it was tearing me up inside almost felt like my soul has died but the show must go on right so years go on and on with that same mentality but the reality my mental health has been slowly decaying. everytime I'm laying down to sleep wishing was my last night but then you came in and changed the game you changed everything gave me purpose again but now your gone too man this life is draining just don't know how much time I have remaining cause this life don't feel right shit just take a gun to my head so I can finally go to bed. and then watch from above as they say awe he's dead..
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