Coffin
kpalmatier120849 Plays
•22 Mar 2022
This shit is hard Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, having a knife in my hand Feeling like I’m living in a coffin I'm coughing underground I'm stressing all my bones are aching I'm trying to get my regards in because im stressing now I get up trying to put my guard up but I'm anxious and trying to to get my placement this shit,hard.
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kp going .. Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
🤙🏾 Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Nice 🌟
Hey @kpalmatier1208! Thanks for sharing 'Coffin' with us! 💥 Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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