QUIET

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Seconds drop like rain. Money shuts my brain. Craving for dis fame.. Don't wanna be called lame.. Heart stops to listen.. In my destiny written.. Dreaming of d riches.. Never liked dis bitches.. Maybe born to suffer.. Demons hate my laughter.. Death frees u from pain. In a world with no gain.. Lonely nigga cries.. Watches as time flies.. I've been under cover.. My life on the wire.. .. Pain is all I know. And its fucking true, its d road I chose. Devils on patrol. Cuz he fucking knows we're lost souls.. Plan a better life.. But ur dreams get shattered.finna fucking die..

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Kelvin William

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4 years ago

Kelvin William

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9 months ago

it's been 4 years

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

What's up @kelvinwilliam.6969219, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'QUIET'! 💥 Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. Timing is important to make your tracks feel more polished, try to get your bars perfectly on beat for the next one. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Smiley tripppl999

4 years ago

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TMBeatZ

4 years ago

I got new battle please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance 👌 💯 #TmListenUpDevohn hope you enjoy 👌

The 1 one

26 days ago

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4 months ago

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8 months ago

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4 years ago

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