What's up @franklinwindham,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'pezzy diss on that one dude you no how you are'! 💥
Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧
A bit of inspiration could really improve your bars. Think about a story you can tell best.
Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way.
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼
Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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What's up @franklinwindham, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'pezzy diss on that one dude you no how you are'! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 A bit of inspiration could really improve your bars. Think about a story you can tell best. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎