Hey @therecklessgenius,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Pain', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ
Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. โจ
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐
This beat choice is great for you! ๐ผ
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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This Is my first song but ill make better ones soon
Hey @therecklessgenius, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Pain', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. โจ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐ This beat choice is great for you! ๐ผ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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