better days!
jesus, jesus, jesus, this my heart cry out, i failed you once again, i woke up with this shame and guilt yea Satan was back at me again! its a new day i repented, my Father said it will be okay, its a new day i wear the crown you will never stay down, dont forget who i am, im the one and only true king the God who created everything, i perfectly made you.. im building you into the warrior you always been, now its your turn ill take the wheel you drive, my eyes see a vision my father has me on a mission, im free and never was lost this was his preparation for my future my trial and tribulations, has me spreading my fathers love your so gracious, my true father my true friend your my forever i promise imma do better because your ways are greater, my heavenly father my savior, i love you!
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jesus, jesus, jesus, this my heart cry out, i failed you once again, i woke up with this shame and guilt yea Satan was back at me again! its a new day i repented, my Father said it will be okay, its a new day i wear the crown you will never stay down, dont forget who i am, im the one and only true king the God who created everything, i perfectly made you.. im building you into the warrior you always been, now its your turn ill take the wheel you drive, my eyes see a vision my father has me on a mission, im free and never was lost this was his preparation for my future my trial and tribulations, has me spreading my fathers love your so gracious, my true father my true friend your my forever i promise imma do better because your ways are greater, my heavenly father my savior, i love you!
my mission is is Jesus my goal is too share his love I wanna bring light to the dark and bring hope to the thirsty souls for Christ Jesus I'm doing my best with the guidedance and motivation from others keep each other lifted spiritually! I wanna do it through muzic
Hey @armoredready4life, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'better days!'! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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