diss track pt1
nigga get back when the rymes start bussin you a lil hoe leave your brain cells gushin . when you pulled lil nigga did nothin pleas do not rap you sound like you are bluffin, i just coped a stack from yo babymom fuck it you was crying hard i was sitting back and puffin pleas dont get started with your hoarding ass habit , room smell like some piss and a dead ass rabbit . empty water bottles nigga you must be thirsty nigga you are 21 acting like your thirty your a cool nigga but you are not worthy nigga getting slurry you gone have a journy i can make yo bitch mine acting like she pregnet fuck her than i end it spin back than i send it 40 pops later you was in a coffin sentence ill bust right in the front entrance nigga push yo chest in
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nigga get back when the rymes start bussin you a lil hoe leave your brain cells gushin . when you pulled lil nigga did nothin pleas do not rap you sound like you are bluffin, i just coped a stack from yo babymom fuck it you was crying hard i was sitting back and puffin pleas dont get started with your hoarding ass habit , room smell like some piss and a dead ass rabbit . empty water bottles nigga you must be thirsty nigga you are 21 acting like your thirty your a cool nigga but you are not worthy nigga getting slurry you gone have a journy i can make yo bitch mine acting like she pregnet fuck her than i end it spin back than i send it 40 pops later you was in a coffin sentence ill bust right in the front entrance nigga push yo chest in
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