pissedOnMyself
These elements in my my mind created Albert Einstein// Super fine ,so I took her out the eat Wontons One Time,. I had skip school in middle schoo,l I was a short black liitle Dude,I thought its Cool mama took that tool beat me wit that belt,Had me feeling over whelmed Im over whelmed wit the music this is what Im Choosin had the take this pen and pad this is what im Doing just the go and make mo bread How the my best friend become a DopeHead capitalism Preaching to the Choir So Sad Dont end up like my dad !!!! what my mama used to Say hoes in and out the house look like the Interstate why the fuck will I ever take her out on another Date That will be ok but I dont really conversate Im half Chinese till I buy a benz and sell my mo ped I used to eat peanut butter and jelly wit no bread see I already made my bed See Im in a world And im so scared Little Red Riding hood in my world could be the FEDS I gotta walk through the woods like im Tony fettuccinio My bad I mean my bad Alpacino.... .fell inlove with a Dolphin shouldve moved to Miami,bought me a Loft and went to the Grammys
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These elements in my my mind created Albert Einstein// Super fine ,so I took her out the eat Wontons One Time,. I had skip school in middle schoo,l I was a short black liitle Dude,I thought its Cool mama took that tool beat me wit that belt,Had me feeling over whelmed Im over whelmed wit the music this is what Im Choosin had the take this pen and pad this is what im Doing just the go and make mo bread How the my best friend become a DopeHead capitalism Preaching to the Choir So Sad Dont end up like my dad !!!! what my mama used to Say hoes in and out the house look like the Interstate why the fuck will I ever take her out on another Date That will be ok but I dont really conversate Im half Chinese till I buy a benz and sell my mo ped I used to eat peanut butter and jelly wit no bread see I already made my bed See Im in a world And im so scared Little Red Riding hood in my world could be the FEDS I gotta walk through the woods like im Tony fettuccinio My bad I mean my bad Alpacino.... .fell inlove with a Dolphin shouldve moved to Miami,bought me a Loft and went to the Grammys
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