Hey @alay_official__!
Thanks for sharing 'A-Lay - Dangerous (MASTER)' with us! π₯
The vocals are a tiny bit too quiet, see if you can put them up a bit!
Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! π§¨
The effects are done well, keep doin' what you're doin'. β
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
Leave a comment
Grrrrr POW π₯ #Alay #summervibes #dangerous
this hittin hard, clean AF, slide thru fam, π―
Hey @alay_official__! Thanks for sharing 'A-Lay - Dangerous (MASTER)' with us! π₯ The vocals are a tiny bit too quiet, see if you can put them up a bit! Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! 𧨠The effects are done well, keep doin' what you're doin'. β A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
πͺπ½Just Amazing Famπ§¨π―Good JobπΌππ½Check My #PuFuππ½π₯β οΈ Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Follow me on IG we giving money away π΅π΅ 500$ On live this Friday night alay_official__ POW π₯
check out my pin track @lightshow Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Tag This β Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Amazing π Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
π₯π₯π₯π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Great π
Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
check me out Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯