Hey @chessy69!
Thanks for sharing 'Second Offense' with us! π₯
The vocals are drownin' out the beat a lil' here, could you turn 'em down a bit?
You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ
You have talent and thats clear in this track. Your flow is hard we just wish that it was consistent throughout the whole track as you fall off beat a few times. Your lyrics are dope, you got such a cool rhyme scheme and you have such clever wordplay. Keep up the great work!
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @chessy69! Thanks for sharing 'Second Offense' with us! π₯ The vocals are drownin' out the beat a lil' here, could you turn 'em down a bit? You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π We like the rhyming, it's tight. β¨ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We like how the beat sounds with your voice. πΌ You have talent and thats clear in this track. Your flow is hard we just wish that it was consistent throughout the whole track as you fall off beat a few times. Your lyrics are dope, you got such a cool rhyme scheme and you have such clever wordplay. Keep up the great work! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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