Hi @elfwkinjunior!
Welcome to our feedback of 'THAS MY BABY __2022 _BY _JUNIOR~LOK323 _1_'! π₯
Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ
You got style and swagger. Your bars are dope and when your flow matches the beat it hits hard. We just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track!
Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€
We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi @elfwkinjunior! Welcome to our feedback of 'THAS MY BABY __2022 _BY _JUNIOR~LOK323 _1_'! π₯ Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ You got style and swagger. Your bars are dope and when your flow matches the beat it hits hard. We just wish the recording quality was improved as this is taking away the potential from this track! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. π€ We can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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