Wassup @elfwkinjunior,
Thank you for sharing 'JUNIOR LOKS323 - SLIDIN BY JUNIOR LOKS323' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us:
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Your bars are dope and when your flow is on point it hits soo hard, you just need to maintain this throughout the whole track! You are really clever with your bars, to make them stand out try improve on your recording quality as they are a bit fuzzy in this mix!
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Wassup @elfwkinjunior, Thank you for sharing 'JUNIOR LOKS323 - SLIDIN BY JUNIOR LOKS323' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! Your bars are dope and when your flow is on point it hits soo hard, you just need to maintain this throughout the whole track! You are really clever with your bars, to make them stand out try improve on your recording quality as they are a bit fuzzy in this mix! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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