rice man

Brian Smith

Author

4 years ago

Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yea I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Yo @briansmith.6861944! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'rice man'! 💥 Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Lovin' the casual vibe to this. Feels effortless. 🌊 We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Brian Smith

Author

4 years ago

my bad if I'm trash lol

Brian Smith

Author

4 years ago

thanks