Wassup @mr_unknown_,
Thank you for sharing 'Hostage' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us:
Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. β
Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. π Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π
The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ
Good song my dude. Def wanna work on the flow a little bit. You could make it a bit tighter in some places. We know it gets tempting to just finish the song but tending to that aspect would def make a huge difference.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Wassup @mr_unknown_, Thank you for sharing 'Hostage' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. β Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. π Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π The beat is fire, nice choice. πΌ Good song my dude. Def wanna work on the flow a little bit. You could make it a bit tighter in some places. We know it gets tempting to just finish the song but tending to that aspect would def make a huge difference. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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