Hey @lucianothecomeup,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'unexpected love'! 💥
Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧
The beat is way too high here, try lowering it so your vocals can shine through!
Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Great concept. Love the story your bars tell!
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶
The delivery is really good on this man. The beat is way way way way way too loud. find a way to mix it down a little bit better and as some compression and some gain on your vocals to bring them out a little bit more but overall this is a really good song.
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @lucianothecomeup, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'unexpected love'! 💥 Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 The beat is way too high here, try lowering it so your vocals can shine through! Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. 🎶 The delivery is really good on this man. The beat is way way way way way too loud. find a way to mix it down a little bit better and as some compression and some gain on your vocals to bring them out a little bit more but overall this is a really good song. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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