lie

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lie

imma be out with a betta man, waiting for ur days end, blasted between a lie and my purpose, tonight heads held high , im ready to shine, takng shots above a tears of wine, up and still trampled on and.u or i crossed a line, ur the meanest fake loyality has ever seen, closing my eyes nto a dream to hide, opened his lust wide, begin a trap to send the message of a price beatin nto ur soul, ur a fucking sacrife to heal this pain im trashed by my name words from yo mouth created a bitch with your name on it, ur a pussy not intellegent a purpose bully hiding memories of all these homies hearts u left to bleed, blowing smoke and continously rollin the fired blunts of weed. u shall never be a seed,u leach sucking misery crump off the highest branch, throw yourself out of the middle your no longer centrals highest thug, i jjust walked in and showed a crew leaders obvious suffering, calling him out to wrap his body in sheets of piss,

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5 years ago

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5 years ago

Hey @carrieperkins.6792726, We appreciate you sharing 'lie' with us! 💥 Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel. We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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