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Hey @josephvalenzuela.3583, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'KiDShinobi - Time'! π₯ Your bars are good, keep it up! π Some good ideas behind this track, keep it up. π Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Good choice of beat here! πΌ Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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