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Make sure your mic is at a good position while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one.
Practice your freestyling a little to improve your sound!
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
So we definitely see where you were going with this. Definitely love the message here. Maybe try a different recording source next time or play with the distance from which you're recording from the mic. The timing could use some practice but overall we appreciate this joint!
This was a nice taste, but we're gunna need a longer track if you want us to give you detailed feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @chosenson, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'HEAVEN_'! π₯ Make sure your mic is at a good position while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Practice your freestyling a little to improve your sound! Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ So we definitely see where you were going with this. Definitely love the message here. Maybe try a different recording source next time or play with the distance from which you're recording from the mic. The timing could use some practice but overall we appreciate this joint! This was a nice taste, but we're gunna need a longer track if you want us to give you detailed feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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