Hey @tyredickinson,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'freestyle'! 💥
Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ Your freestyling isn't quite there yet, practice makes perfect!
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏
Yeah man good stuff. Try switching up what you saying a lil more next time. Variety is summ people notice. Catchy tune doe!
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @tyredickinson, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'freestyle'! 💥 Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ Your freestyling isn't quite there yet, practice makes perfect! Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Yeah man good stuff. Try switching up what you saying a lil more next time. Variety is summ people notice. Catchy tune doe! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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