Hey @Lilbitchface,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'elvative'! π₯
Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. β¨
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ
911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! π§¨
The lyrical content here is super diverse and philosophical, we're impressed by all the places you're drawing from. Just gotta make sure you're hugging that beat, there were a few times you lost it a little. The vocal quality is also a little low compared to the rest of the mix, try cleaning that up a little.
This track is crazy good, we can't wait to see what else you got. Please keep it up! π₯
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Felt the beat as I was walking the Cali shore. Ok
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@rapfame_ar_team any tips for vocal improvement?
Hey @Lilbitchface, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'elvative'! π₯ Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. β¨ Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ 911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! 𧨠The lyrical content here is super diverse and philosophical, we're impressed by all the places you're drawing from. Just gotta make sure you're hugging that beat, there were a few times you lost it a little. The vocal quality is also a little low compared to the rest of the mix, try cleaning that up a little. This track is crazy good, we can't wait to see what else you got. Please keep it up! π₯ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Yo thanks for the feedback
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