Hey @josephodhiambo200.6740913,
We're gonna review your track 'follies'. Let's get it!
The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that.
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat.
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @josephodhiambo200.6740913, We're gonna review your track 'follies'. Let's get it! The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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