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Everyday I work for the man like a slave writing raps down ryming on the page they'll rave  tell them about my escapades Break the safe to the piggy bank show what ive saved too many days of pay I didnt make wage My payments late money gone away this stanks I have no hesitation to kill the hate Drain my veins with your fangs but  dont leave any stains. Just like blade hybrid not the same Im just different i dont Change how strange i feel the same even though my life rearranged. pot head arested jailed in the caged treated inhumane. trouble stay away feel my pain headache like a bullet grazed the brain im going insain they say im too plain for the fame Its ok  I feel no shame look how many lyrics ive made laying in the shade ive got it made felling tired should i stay awake when notes get erased i feel enraged just beacause this is art they cant replace whats lost and gone away makes my time a waste. Wrote my Dreams on a page i knew there would be opsticles to face put on that ricky bobby face as my trail of dust they try to chase im winning the race First place savé sippin lemonaid purecane sugar sweetens the taste. Bitch its C&H the best that ever came on these dames lips tits or faces. Running these hoes gotta grab some aceics Im unique aint got replacements

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5 years ago

Everyday I work for the man like a slave writing raps down ryming on the page they'll rave  tell them about my escapades Break the safe to the piggy bank show what ive saved too many days of pay I didnt make wage My payments late money gone away this stanks I have no hesitation to kill the hate Drain my veins with your fangs but  dont leave any stains. Just like blade hybrid not the same Im just different i dont Change how strange i feel the same even though my life rearranged. pot head arested jailed in the caged treated inhumane. trouble stay away feel my pain headache like a bullet grazed the brain im going insain they say im too plain for the fame Its ok  I feel no shame look how many lyrics ive made laying in the shade ive got it made felling tired should i stay awake when notes get erased i feel enraged just beacause this is art they cant replace whats lost and gone away makes my time a waste. Wrote my Dreams on a page i knew there would be opsticles to face put on that ricky bobby face as my trail of dust they try to chase im winning the race First place savé sippin lemonaid purecane sugar sweetens the taste. Bitch its C&H the best that ever came on these dames lips tits or faces. Running these hoes gotta grab some aceics Im unique aint got replacements

5 years ago

Hey @CalebRyanLeDonHaverly, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'single take '! 💥 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

let's collab

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