Life is Hard (07:39)
Jaheem 75Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Yo @jaheem75.6718079! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Life is Hard (07:39)'! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Try to add some of your own lyrics on your next track to help personalize your sound. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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