Hey @diminity,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'We on ft.Dhump', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ
Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. โจ
You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Good choice of beat! ๐ผ
This track is pure HYPE! You stepped up and hit this hard!
maybe the beat is a bit high here. Got an impression that it's taking over your vocals. Try putting it down a little. It shouldn't hurt the overall track's dynamic and energy.
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! ๐ค
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @diminity, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'We on ft.Dhump', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. โจ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good choice of beat! ๐ผ This track is pure HYPE! You stepped up and hit this hard! maybe the beat is a bit high here. Got an impression that it's taking over your vocals. Try putting it down a little. It shouldn't hurt the overall track's dynamic and energy. Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! ๐ค We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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