Hey @chezzdagoat,
We appreciate you sharing 'Jus Came Up' with us! π₯
This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work.
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ You'r riding that beat flawlessly, so confident. Great work. π
This beat choice is great for you! πΌ
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @chezzdagoat, We appreciate you sharing 'Jus Came Up' with us! π₯ This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ You'r riding that beat flawlessly, so confident. Great work. π This beat choice is great for you! πΌ Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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