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Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. π
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The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
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