itโs straight and he got his own style keep pushing you get better with time
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Wassup @jonathankwartel,
Thank you for sharing 'bipolar rhyme ' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us:
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. ๐ถ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ
Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects.
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need a studio Bro
itโs straight and he got his own style keep pushing you get better with time Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
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Wassup @jonathankwartel, Thank you for sharing 'bipolar rhyme ' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us: Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. ๐ถ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat here! ๐ผ Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ค It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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