life
AvuyileBunge66 Plays
•04 Jan 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @avrealking, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'life '! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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