do better

rickjonesbitch1

Author

5 years ago

Wish I could do better wish I could be a better person wish All I wanted to do was be a great dad wanna give them a better life then I had One morning I woke up notice that I was blessed in this life Got a family that loves yes Like a super hero to my kids kids I can make mistakes and they forget Why can't we learn take after them they're supposed to be learning from us how to live and how to react to shit Wish I could do better wish I could be a baetter person Maybe someday I'm not afraid to die but I'm afraid to leave them and here's why I don't want Them to have to go through tuff times without a shoulder to cry struggle the same as I did I wanna them have a better life to live I don't want him to struggle a bunch I want them to set goals always accomplish Want them to excel everything they do push it to the side negative abolish Wish I could do better wish I could be a baetter person Maybe someday

Ricco baby

5 years ago

for me your vocals line are to straight or flat you know what vital signs look like up down put some peaks in high and lows feel me Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

{GB} Dubble A

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

Jay Motixn

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

CROSS BONES

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Kia33

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Highvibe@6

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

#🤑#1LilMike#1🤑

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

King east

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

17Lijah

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Derrick Roseboro

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯

Shaun Walker

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

UNI RIN 🦄🪐🔮

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

WaxDaWizard

5 years ago

I FUX WIT IT G! I can feel the meaning morals and in general the purity in the lyrics. plus the beat is pretty kool. u and @makadew shud collab that ish wud be 💣💣💣💣💣

Gavin England

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

Paul Sender

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Big Balla

14 days ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Michael Inniss

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

(O.T.M)SoljaThaTruth

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

J HAVOC

6 months ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥