Hey @jamesluis,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Temptation ', here are our thoughts 💥
Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic!
You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼
Chill AF! Serious vibes on this one!
We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
I got new battle please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance 👌 💯 #TmBeThereInTheMornin hope you enjoy 👌
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Really love it
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @jamesluis, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Temptation ', here are our thoughts 💥 Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 Chill AF! Serious vibes on this one! We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
I like the main message 🔥 Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: On point 🎯
I got new battle please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance 👌 💯 #TmBeThereInTheMornin hope you enjoy 👌
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥