Tears

30 Plays

24 Dec 2021

Have been miserable for a long time now Which leaves my heart sour Filled a bucket with tears And no one to help me conquer my fears I cry everyday And they all think it's amazing If I end my life maybe I"ll be fine suicide thoughts cause it sounds like the only option cause I really don't like this position that am in Why is life so unfair Those who care are never cared for Must I always abide by their stupid laws I really wish this pain go and I could reap wat I sow Tears,Tears When will the tears stop cause I really feel lost Fears,Fears When will I over come my fear Cause it make my heart tear My life full of regret Alot of memories I would like to forget Don't wanna start taking pills But it might get me relieved That might reduce the pain Even though my heart can never be the same And they will never love me again I really don't care (anymore) Cause I can't keep on living in fear And keep on shedding tears Always left in the dark Always told that am wack They said have changed And I can't handle my rage But they never cared to ask They just judge and pass I really wish this could all be in the past Tears,Tears When will the tears stop cause I really feel lost Fears,Fears When will I over come my fear Cause it make my heart tear

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3 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Hi @peculiarsunday! Welcome to our feedback of 'Tears'! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic. The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them. We recommend checking out our Masterclasses. They're a really helpful way to learn tip to improve your skills! Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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