shedtriolo
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•16 Dec 2021
italians like me r fun bkuz its a tradition in american italians to describe people with food. like look at this shedtriolo, ya bog chooch. but trust me i aint no jersey shore guy, oh no im the red headed italian. cursed from birth.
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Hi there @bigcheba, Here's some feedback on your track 'shedtriolo', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌 Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You got some really cool bars which is dope and the beat choice is fire. However, your flow isn't really on beat and the recording quality is quite poor. Try work on this in your next submission! Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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