#Dumped..!

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13 Dec 2021

Dumb Ass Mother Fucker Acting Like A BOMB Shell Trending Like See Shell Moving Like Dead Whale Acting Like Hot Plate Rocking On Her Big Pants Smelling Like Skunk Male Dumped Like A Dirty Nappy Snitching On A White Man Kicked Like A Dirty Trash Flirting On My Sisters Man Failed Like A Rich Girl Rolling With Old Mans Stiff Like A Old Lady Her Cooky Finished Like A Jersey Wool

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Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @mqwathilindokuhle, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on '#Dumped..! '! 💥 Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. ✨ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You'r riding that beat flawlessly, so confident. Great work. 🌠 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

🎑MASTERCEREMONY/M.C SOULO

3 years ago

check my work Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Karma fyre

3 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉