Wassup @gaugeparker,
Thank you for sharing 'lil emo boy' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us:
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect.
Your rhyme scheme here is a bit off, try adding some more structure.
Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way.
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼
Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Wassup @gaugeparker, Thank you for sharing 'lil emo boy' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. Your rhyme scheme here is a bit off, try adding some more structure. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎