Missing You - officialyungballer
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•12 Dec 2021
MISSING YOU- OFFICIALYUNGBALLER This one for you grandma It's YungBaller in da studio Grandma I miss you I would do anything for you I know your lookin down on me everyday God came and took you away in May On May 19 it will mark three years It's hard, you really left us in tears And It ain't ah day ion think about you Forever ima always be loving you too We was there on you bedside the moment u passed We didn't get to say goodbye u left so fast I am going to see you again But I just don't know when You left many of us grieving But ima go and let you have a good evening I just wanna let you know, I love you
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hi there @officialyungballer, Here's some feedback on your track 'Missing You - officialyungballer', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Good choice of beat! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Maybe give one of the Masterclasses a go, it's great way to help your timing on tracks. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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