Hey @lilsaltydawg,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Follow your dreams '! 💥
We can't hear you too well on this, try turning up your vocals a bit in the mix next time!
Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼
It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! 💜
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @lilsaltydawg, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Follow your dreams '! 💥 We can't hear you too well on this, try turning up your vocals a bit in the mix next time! Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 It's great how you portray raw emotion in this track, not an easy task but you've done it well! 💜 Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
I’ll make a edited version next month