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time machine

time machine

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06 Dec 2021

Everything strait over here even though it's not perfect, if I could take time in my hand and reverse it, I would but it ain't a possibility, withstood all the fucking hostility, from niggas that ain't have my best interest in they heart, it's crazy how friends turn to enemies I knew the love was fake from the start, some niggas got some hating ass tendencies when they see you rising man, that shit could tear a friendship apart. I'm a lone wolf nowadays, I like to spend my time alone I think that I'm just going thru a phase. Riding with the window rolled down and im thinking bout the past and mistakes that I made in my life while I blaze. I wish I had a time machine that would be the shit. cause i done made mistakes in my life ill admit. I'd done fell but I crawled out the dirt like a zombie. And anyone I hurt that ain't deserve it, I'm sorry. every season winter in these streets it never ends. they like to call us Savages cuz we live off the land when you looking from a distance you would never understand I didn't choose this life this s*** was not part of the plan people that you love overtime they seem to vanish the wicked got more influence than good upon this planet the ones you trust want you to fail and I don't understand it, they don't want to see you fly and break your wings to keep you grounded. Why, why cant these bitches keep it real with me, Lies-Its greed in her heart no concealing it. She smile- but really though her eyes is revealing it. And tryna sweet talk like she innocent I wish I had a time machine that would be the shit. cause i done made mistakes in my life ill admit. I'd done fell but I crawled out the dirt like a zombie. And anyone I hurt that ain't deserve it, I'm sorry.

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3 years ago

Hi @r_el! Welcome to our feedback of 'time machine'! πŸ’₯ Seems like your voice is getting hidden by the beat, put the vocals up for a great mix! Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The effects are done well, keep doin' what you're doin'. ⭐ Talent + hard work = great rap! And you got it!! Seriously impressed with this, now get back in the studio and keep makin' tracks! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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