Hi there @dteknick,
Here's some feedback on your track 'Sanstitre', thank you for sharing with us! π₯
Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'!
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows!
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ
Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel.
Some old school spitting on this one, love the breathy delivery and there's some tight rhyme schemes in here. Unfortunately the vocal effects are overdone for sure so it gets very hard to hear what you're saying. We also felt the adlibs detracted from the track a little bit, you've definitely got the skills to carry a straight hip hop track with nothing but bars and satisfying flows, so no need for all the extra eccentric stuff.
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi there @dteknick, Here's some feedback on your track 'Sanstitre', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel. Some old school spitting on this one, love the breathy delivery and there's some tight rhyme schemes in here. Unfortunately the vocal effects are overdone for sure so it gets very hard to hear what you're saying. We also felt the adlibs detracted from the track a little bit, you've definitely got the skills to carry a straight hip hop track with nothing but bars and satisfying flows, so no need for all the extra eccentric stuff. A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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