Hey @papafati!
Thanks for sharing 'Girl you make me Happy' with us! π₯
Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! π§
Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. However, sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect.
Good choice of beat! πΌ
Loving the laid back vibe here! π
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
peep my latest battle and drop an honest vote if you have time
Bars: 9/10
Delivery: 9/10
Impression: 9/10
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Delivery: Dope π₯
Impression: Dope π₯
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DJ FAST Girl you make me Happy
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Please check out my music and let me know what you think about it Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Hey @papafati! Thanks for sharing 'Girl you make me Happy' with us! π₯ Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! π§ Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. However, sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Good choice of beat! πΌ Loving the laid back vibe here! π We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Keep striving for greatness π₯πΆπ₯πΆ
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
peep my latest battle and drop an honest vote if you have time Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Dropping anthems that'll be remembered, a true icon! π Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯