hard tyme

Danieljacob🙏♥⭐⛽🌈

Author

5 years ago

hard times ah make ah yung ye pull they hair out.... plz god come get me im looking at the dark sight.... Black clouds. srouded my hole life .....lost too many.... my head cant even think right smoke in inter demons....what we had was the best i ever did righti. clingin.. cant fa get about yo everything yo life was brithin... My life is empty yo was everything everything ye see me left me dreamin....no in between thy standfast e in mean cleanin....thy frowning faces... alot of thy tear incompleted.. cant...thy face to faces.... thy out to get thy. inter demon.... Cant face the cases .....captive they try to hold ya vitom.... crying moma savein .... praying god... fagive ah sinna . baybee.... comein cget me from this haven...... hell... ah life of sin life of army ye dewells.. bloody fears comeing... for the dreams to c share ... make me grab the drakeo ....pop it... remanessing about chu.... better believe i got u... never stressing fa eva watchin....thanking god hope in chossein the right. one0... bless after all the this creation... flesh burnin daily blasmfa ... life after shockin n heart dropin.. no captive the who shot u mindless autltdiress knocken... he got a body jockin stoley flossin..Bars time hard over mines... lawd plz daviin awayz of graviny partin... death ah find ya . close my eye in the missed of times in. the signs life for ever is tha answer.. the ever lasting time of blessing..shine.. apond the earth strive the getto times ... love each one with a holy song we in r scrapcher finds... humbleness joy what a time will bring .. holey life superm.. watching my getti dream.. God is truely specking.... loveing is the ending stay foucus in u... realiz my time is refeting dreamin haveing blessings the dayly lesson... chasing my holy passion ..in my rushing... no stopin. chrshin ... fuite for harvest... the dayly

jamesthehellsent

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

∀•P•Ǝ•X

5 years ago

Yo This beat goes HARD!!! Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Kjell Van Geenhoven

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Swedi Emanuel

5 years ago

swedi dox nataxy Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Perfect 💯

AK.47..BESSA

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Bonnie G

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Omkalo Traide

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

Larry_Tha_Don

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Derrick Roseboro

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯

AkiTra

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Triczip2

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Yousseff

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

LilBradyJordan_theGOAT♑

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

TMBeatZ

5 years ago

I got new battles please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance to 👌 👍

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @danieljacob87, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'hard tyme', here are our thoughts 💥 Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 This track is one that listeners can chill out and vibe to. 🌊 Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

☝🏾BIGSWYPER🦊

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

ReaperMan1830

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

🤞🏾👑〽️Queen

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

💿🔥DJ KING GIOVANNI O.G🔱👑

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 1/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯