One thing
Stevil Kannevil93 Plays
•05 Nov 2021
i did things, ive done things win things an won things run in on something's mixed things with onions one thing i know ive always had flow but my luck in this game is no body knows my story my game , my peeps maintain, the grain in my chains aint ever even change the reign , of me, these hearts these streets ,those cars these beats, my bars believe never have i ever played a part as a shark swim in murky waters after dark with a nark noah gave life taking all to the ark i ball in the light, super fly with the art straight to your ear as i record on an app that i found online while i was bored relaxed with support as an act i keep it intact as freaky as it sounds im smaller than Shaq
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Wassup @stevilkannevil, Thank you for sharing 'One thing' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Your bars are on the beat every time! You just don't miss! This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! 🥵 If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. You have a dope cadence on this track, you put stress on certain rhyming syllables to give the track more rhythm. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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