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•31 Oct 2021
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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#WillSwypeGoneSwype Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @tannerplymale, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'oh'! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Ain't no other word for it, this is a vibe. 🌊 Great improvised flow here, you made this masterclass your own! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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