Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @geraldlightfoot.6789, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'I wanna do right'! 💥 Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. You're off beat on this, try and pay a little more attention to when your bars land on the track. Good choice of beat! 🎼 Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

👑 Melinated King👑

3 years ago

#Gerald check out my 3 new songs I posted up

👑 Melinated King👑

3 years ago

Brilliant